I hear it being a very good R&B kind of song. It needs piano, and back-up singers.
After the Sunset
Verse
They tried to warn me,
But I wouldn't listen.
I was searching for
Something missing.
And if it was her,
Then I will never be
In my heart and soul
Completely complete.
So for a short time,
And for a large price
I found myself
Lost in paradise.
And when it was over,
When it was over
A simple 'Thank you'
Was all I told her.
Chorus
Her eyes
Were as blue as the sky,
And in my better days,
They were my sunrise.
And though I know it's set
On the horizion,
In my mind
She will always live on.
And though I can not bring it back,
I'll never regret what we had.
Verse
Now I never said,
'Take back the memories,
Forget the laughter,
For all the misery.'
Because between the lines
Of all of these times,
I would never trade
What was once mine.
Chorus
Her eyes
Were as blue as the sky,
And in my better days
They were my sunrise.
And though I know it's set
On the horizion,
In my mind
She will always live on.
And though I can not bring it back,
I'll never forget what we had.
Bridge
She could not settle down,
Ran away, and turned around.
No one could know her
No one could own her.
Chorus
Simply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThis me tear up a little!! My fav thing you have written. I love it now it just needs music behind it...very powerful.
ReplyDeleteWell thanks guys! And to think, I wrote the song off as not being very good.
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