I am always very indifferent to songs when I first write them. The same is true with this song. That is why I utilize my friends and my blog as sounding boards. It is not until other people experience the songs that I start to draw my own conclusions about them. So as always, all feedback is welcome. Additionally, the comments on my songs in previous posts have been really good and insightful, and for those that have posted comments I really appreciate your thoughts and I take them to heart. Oh yeah, and I don't know why I sat so stiff for this song, its funny, a juxtaposition to the meaning of the song.
In Transit
Verse
With one hand untie the two.
Set my feet, and dive in you.
I fall.
Explored you all.
Build the trust and kiss your face.
Arm yourself for one more taste
Of what
Will soon be gone.
Prechorus
Don't let me sink my teeth in you.
Don't let my eyes bore holes right through.
Chorus
In transit always.
In transit always.
I am the highway
Carrying you.
You can't stay.
Verse
A subtle touch, a seamless plan.
A slight misstep, I miss your hand
And fall.
A graceless cause.
You can't want me when I want you.
What I want is what I soon
Will miss.
Fate or bliss?
Prechorus
Don't let yourself get used to me.
Prepare yourself for what used to be.
Chorus
In transit always.
In transit always.
I am the highway
Carrying you.
You can't stay.
Bridge
A launching pad, or a place of rest;
Your journey doesn't end with me.
I will set you free.
I will set you free.
Chorus
In transit always.
In transit always.
I am the highway
Carrying you.
You can't stay.
Carrying you.
You can't stay.
Glad to see you back, Chase :)
ReplyDeleteLove it. The lyrics hit a little close to home--I think a lot of us have that person who we feel like we're always "in transit" with. I can only hope to be set free!
ReplyDeleteVocally, I think you are improving.